In Thursday's first lesson, we were all asked to go round and write feedback about one person on each table's digipak drafts.
The feedback I got was;
Composition- style- set up- of materials and texture.
Colour/imagery- sets atsmophere of the music video genre.
Typography- Sketches of blue colour in imagery reflects colour of the font.
Generic conventions- Colour chosen, professional insight used.
Your font seems so randomly placed but I really like the imagery, you should put an effect on your own photos like the one you found on flickr.
Maybe you should re-take your photos from different angles also. Yeah, the font is randomly placed because the image I found on Flickr wasn't very large, but of course I will not be using this for my actual piece.
I am obviously going to re-take the draft photographs at different angles and add the same effect over them aswell. I also have an image of our performer to use for the poster and booklet.
Like the story book theme.
More text. This was only example imagery, and I had yet to add any of the text because I was just going to wait for when I have taken the photographs for this.
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